Japanese producer looking for feedback on J-pop song 🙏

Hello everyone,

I'm new to this forum but I saw that this would be a good place to meet J-pop connoisseurs. I'm a Japanese producer from Tokyo and I've released a J-Pop song called "Fall 4 U". I would love you to enjoy it and tell me some feedback, please !

You can hear the song on Youtube : https://youtu.be/QmYXKciwH2I

And also on streaming platforms (Apple Music, Spotify...)

Thank you already !

Louis Vision

Quote from jayne_morgan

this is nice I like it, did you write the song too, or is this a joint-work?

Hello ! Thank you very much, I produce the the song and co-wrote with Japanese singer Ruri-A and American musician who lives in Tokyo Mark Stein.

Quote from ravenhalo

I listened to both songs on the YouTube account. I liked both. Holds much potential!

Thank you so much !! I will do my best !

Quote from 2yr

she sounds wonderful, i wish i could know what it means!~

Thank you !! So I should add english translation in the subtitles. It's a song about the sweet feeling of falling in Love

Thank you all very much !