One of the fanfics, I have written be like:
The snow outside has gotten melted by the spring sun.
Seonghwa and his girlfriend are standing outside the clothing store looking at some of the clothes.
She looks at a black, sparkly dress.
"This dress is so beautiful." she says.
"It reminds me of the night sky." he says.
"But I don't know if I can afford it."
"We'll see tomorrow."
"I hope I'll look pretty in that dress."
"You do look pretty right now." he says, making a smile appear on her lips.
"Well... let's meet here tomorrow at 1 PM." she says.
"Alright, see you."
Then both of the go home.
rereading this part made me cringe because of the awkward and unrealistic dialogue....
