Display MoreMaybe she is your professor?
I'm seeing Characters, a Setting, Pot, Conflict, themes. This contains all of elements of a story. And you even used FORESHADOWING.
When we are blessed with a thread with TWO coherent thoughts strung together without massive spelling & grammatical errors I take notice.
YouChanDoThis - you're getting 25 acorns.
I don't get any akorns??